Opening lyrics
I really can't believe
That I did it again.
Now I'm sitting in my room
With eyes full of tears.
I need you in my life,
Please dont walk away.
I'm tired of being the man,
Girl I wana be your man.
a clear indication of deep regret from the writer ...a good play of words "i am tired of being the man , i wanna be your man' This is an indication that the writer suffers from multiple personalities. He is something else to impress the general public and probably the sweetest guy when he is with his girlfriend
a clear indication of deep regret from the writer ...a good play of words "i am tired of being the man , i wanna be your man' This is an indication that the writer suffers from multiple personalities. He is something else to impress the general public and probably the sweetest guy when he is with his girlfriend
Like a DNA test,
Let me tell you the truth
Girl I lied and I cheated yeah
I broke your heart
Dont wana play the blame
here is a simple simile which we clearly do not expect in love songs ...DNA test have some sort of accuracy which the writer uses to pour out genuine feelings ...genius of him
Verse 2
Even though I hurt you
You can't deny that I love you
You know I do
I mean look at all the things
That we have been through
When your daddy passed away
I was there for you
And your friends turned
Against you
I was there with you
Baby you can't deny it
I have always cared for you
hmm is it me alone or do i sense some form of desperateness from the writer in this regard ? He is actually black mailing the girl into taking him back . Now i dont know about you but this usually happens when you really messed up and cannot justify it . its called love
Baby girl I love you
I would do anything
Just to be with you
And I am what I am
Because of you
the above lines reassure us of the opening lines of verse two ...its actually a good way of keeping your in check with your topic .
Verse 3Who will I call when
I need some booty call?
Above all,
Personally i am not happy with the opening lines of the third verse , it becomes a simple question of can you call your lover for a booty call ? it doesnt seem concrete
He goes on to ask the girl multiple questions that show us the nature of this dream relationship ..its beautiful really . The hopes , the dreams , the activities .
this is probably young love at its best and is bound to make you feel nostalgic. I guess the setting here would be 15/16 year olds ??
He drops the bomb with a "where ever you are i hope you can hear me" . Its is common for people writing about people they will never see to use that line. Its not an appeal nor does it show hope ?? i feel the last two lines should have had better conviction and weight
Flow- 3/5
Beat- 5/5
Content- 4/5
Lyrical intelligence- 2/5
Articulation- 2/5
Overall- 5.5/10
*please note that these are my opinions. you can submit yours by commenting below
*please note that these are my opinions. you can submit yours by commenting below
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